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I wrote this and would like someone to edit it for me-consiceness help! Thanks in advance!!!As the climax ends, Rainsford, in fear, “leaps far out into the sea” (26), Rainsford’s desperation as well as fear and brings the factor of revenge as well as self-satisfaction in. When Rainsford, instead of escaping after surviving, hides behind the curtains of General Zaroff’s room, the reader surely believes that he is there to be congratulated and rewarded. However, that umption is proved wrong with the irony of that Rainsford is not satisfied when General Zaroff congratulates him and says that he has “won the game” (27). Rainsford claims that he is “still a beast at bay” (27) and hints an upcoming battle between the two. However, Connell leaves the story with Rainsford sleeping after deciding that he has “never slept in a better bed” (28). Though Connell leaves the reader hanging, Rainsford must kill General Zaroff after all the fear, desperation, and hopelessness that he has endured